Resume accomplishment - worded correctly?

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How could I word this accomplishment to make it more concise and stronger...

  • Developed a complete North American supply chain for a newly formed business with 4 production sites and 15,000 customers

The job description:  Led a cross-functional team of Operations, IT, Engineering, Accounting and Business Analysts through the development and integration of logistics management software into various ERP systems including SAP, JDE and BPCIS for multiple Fortune 500 companies. Responsible for the entire project life cycle from scope definition, code development, start up operations, through account stabilization.

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I'm concerned that it will be read that I did all or even most of the work.  The project was a complex project that was only successful because of the work of the team.  I did lead the team, had decision making authority and was the customer facing person.

Thanks in advance!

Submitted by Wendii Lord on Thursday August 15th, 2013 1:38 pm

• Developed NA supply chain for new business (4 production sites & 15K customers) by leading cross-functional team of 50.

Should fit on one line.

Wendii

Submitted by alan roper on Thursday August 15th, 2013 2:38 pm

many thanks!  My boss was hounding me to get my resume completed today for an internal opening.  I sometimes get hung up on getting things "Perfect".  Think I might be a little "C"?
thanks again!

Submitted by Roy Dean on Wednesday August 21st, 2013 11:55 pm

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